The real haiku...
Skippy and Madkane have indirectly informed me as to the proper form of haiku, which is:
..."haiku, as we all know, are 17 syllable poems, with three lines each, the first and third lines having 5 syllables, and the second having 7. it's a japanese thing."---Skippy
So with that, how about:
The top falls through it
no bottom to catch empty
while monkies wonder
... tad more challenging, but still fun.



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