Monday, August 02, 2004

The real haiku...

Skippy and Madkane have indirectly informed me as to the proper form of haiku, which is:

..."haiku, as we all know, are 17 syllable poems, with three lines each, the first and third lines having 5 syllables, and the second having 7. it's a japanese thing."---Skippy

So with that, how about:

The top falls through it
no bottom to catch empty
while monkies wonder


... tad more challenging, but still fun.


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